KKS 71

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残なくちるぞめでたき桜花ありて世中はてのうければ

nokori naku
chiru zo medetaki
sakurabana
ari-te yo no naka
hate no ukere-ba

That is what's splendid
Their scattering, leaving nothing
The cherry blossoms
Living on in the world
The end is suffering

Notes

splendid
medetashi is a rare word in poetry, hardly appearing in any poems but this one. One significant example is this poem from the Tales of Ise:

ちればこそいとど桜はめでたけれうき世に何か久しかるべき

Cherry blossoms are splendid exactly because they scatter. What in this fleeting world lasts long?

Mabuchi may be correct that the Ise poem is based on this KKS poem.

Analysis

Starting with Keichū (Yozaishō), nearly every commenter has recognized that this feels like a response to the previous poem, highlighting the scattering of the blossoms as the best part of their appeal.

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