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梅がえにきゐる鶯春かけて鳴けども未いまだ雪は降つつ

mume ga e ni
ki-iru uguisu
haru kake-te
nake-domo imada
yuki wa furi-tsutsu

The warbler that comes
And sits on the plum branch
Extending to spring
Is crying and yet still
The snow continues to fall.

Notes

Extending to spring
This line is notoriously difficult, and there are few contemporary examples of "time word + kakete" -- while there are a number of later examples, they may have been written based on the phrase in this poem as a time when the original meaning was no longer certain. There are almost as many explanations as there are commentaries. A number of older commentaries thought this line connected to the last one, and so it was the snow that was falling into spring. Most scholars connect the line to the warbler's crying. Although there is almost no agreement on what the phrase actually means, they seem to fall into three general ideas:
  1. The warbler is crying from winter into spring
  2. The warbler is sending its thoughts to spring, hoping for its coming
  3. The warbler is saying "It's spring!" with its cry
Given the extreme disagreement among prominent scholars it's difficult to say that there is any correct interpretation. Unfortunately, the reading of this line also affects the scholars' overall view of the meaning of the poem.


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