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	* I don't know where the bird is crying from. (Takeoka)		* I don't know where the bird is crying from. (Takeoka)
	* The bird is flying overhead. (Katagiri)		* The bird is flying overhead. (Katagiri)

			This poem appears in the ''Sarumaru collection'' and is listed under Sarumaru's name in several other sources (such as a Shunzei poetry competition and Kintō's ''[[Sanjū rokunin sen]]''). Sarumaru is a shadowy figure about whom very little is known, even whether he actually existed or not. Katigiri notes 24 anonymous KKS poems that are also found in the ''Sarumaru Collection''. His conclusion is that the KKS and the ''Sarumaru Collection'' both drew from traditional songs.

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	== Analysis ==		== Analysis ==

			The "birds" theme continues from the previous poem, although there are no actual spring images except for the "yobuko" bird. The vague translation above is meant to express the great uncertainty in what this poem means: almost every part of the poem is disputed in one way or another. Where is the poet? Where is the bird? What does ''obotsukanaku'' (unclear) mean exactly, and what does it apply to? Who is the bird crying for?

			To sum up, the basic disagreements are:

			# Whether the poet lives in the mountains or is traveling
			# Whether the poet is pretending the bird is calling for him, or for a mate/child
			# Whether ''obotsukanaku'' refers to the location of the bird or the reason the bird is crying.

			Here are some overall readings in rough chronological order:

			* Early Nijō-school poets such as Tameie accepted a tradition that ascribed this poem to Sarumaru (see below) and said that he composed this poem on his way to Tanba when he heard the ''yobukodori'' singing at Nakayama.
			* The poet has gone into seclusion in the mountains and cannot get any tidings, and hearing the ''yobukodori'' cry makes the poet uneasy (''obotsukanaku''). (Sōgi)
			* The bird crying for its child is ''obotsukanaku''。(''Engoki'')
			* The bird could be crying for me, or someone else, but if I try to seek it I won't be able to find it (Keichū)
			* Because the trees are so deep I cannot find the bird that’s crying. (''Seigi'')
			* The person does not know where to go -- should he use the bird as a guide? (Takanao (''Shinshaku''), Miura(1943))
			* Why is the bird crying for me when I'm in these unknown mountains? (Kaneko(1927))
			* The bird is calling for its mate; how sad. (Kubota(1937))
			* I don't know where the bird is crying from. (Takeoka)
			* The bird is flying overhead. (Katagiri)

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== Text ==

[題しらず]

[Topic unknown]

[よみ人しらず]

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をちこちのたづきも知らぬ山中におぼつかなくも<ruby>呼子鳥<rt>よぶことり</rt></ruby>かな

{{PoemPair
|orig=
<poem>
ochikochi no
tazuki mo shira-nu
yamanaka ni
obotsukanaku mo
yobukodori kana
</poem>

|trans=
<poem>
Here or there
With no way of knowing
In the mountains
Quite unclear, calling,
The yoboku bird!
</poem>
}}

== Notes ==

;yobuko bird
:There is a ''kakekotoba'' (pivot word) on ''obotsukanaku mo yobu'' (calling unclearly) and ''yobukodori'' (yobuko bird). There has never been certainty on what exactly this bird is. Katagiri analyzes the usage from the ''Man'yōshū'' and concludes that it is associated with spring, and thus once referred to a specific bird (rather than just any bird that is calling). But he believes that even by the ''Man'yōshū'' era the exact reference may have been lost, and it was simply used (as it is here) to play on ''yobu'' ("call") or ''yobu ko'' ("call a child"). On the other hand, Takeoka sides with the majority on identifying it with a cuckoo, despite the seasonal mismatch. Other older theories (particularly those associated with ''kokin denjū'' "three birds" theories) included warbler, other kinds of cuckoos, and even a monkey. There were also associated legends involving mothers calling for their children.

Other sources:

* ''[[Kokin waka rokujō]]'' | ''[[Sanjū rokunin sen]]''

== Analysis ==

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